Doorway To Who Knows Where --
Featuring Julie Eger
This poem stopped my heart. From here and now to here forever.
Hits hard at the guts..deathly adventureAlso don't forget to post any of your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited!
This is a horrible shift of time which comes too often.
This is fast, powerful and gut-wrenching. Excellently done.
A few words saying it all. The shift between life and death can be instanteous.
succint and well said..!
oooofff! sad shift in time!
Powerful. Chilling. True.
... one never knows when this shift in time will come, and this is not the way I want to go. Few words spoke volumes.
that was gripping and powerful!!thank you!
Just want to thank everyone for your comments. It was a tough day.
ah, the fragility of life. a powerful take on the prompt.
oh, so well saidsad and powerful~
That happens way too often. Your fellow was so young, that adds much to the tragic effect...
So much happens in those nano-seconds--whole universes built and destroyed--Thank you for this--beautifully executed.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment! Jukota